good. address all of these following issues and this will be a good piece for final review!
quantities are better aligned. but now the segments are quite top heavy - think about composition and presentation of the symbols in order to craft the best display possible.
title and sub-head placement need work with the rest of the graphic - current placement fights with the rest. establish a grid structure and use it. consider typographic hierarchy just as you would in type studio.
what are those orange dots? seem significant so need a label
why the blue? i think a color is a good idea - just be sure to ask... is this appropriate to the subject? to the magazine? is it legible?
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good. address all of these following issues and this will be a good piece for final review!
quantities are better aligned. but now the segments are quite top heavy - think about composition and presentation of the symbols in order to craft the best display possible.
title and sub-head placement need work with the rest of the graphic - current placement fights with the rest. establish a grid structure and use it. consider typographic hierarchy just as you would in type studio.
what are those orange dots? seem significant so need a label
why the blue? i think a color is a good idea - just be sure to ask... is this appropriate to the subject? to the magazine? is it legible?
haha! I love the giant word "delicious!"
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