School of Design/Fall 2008/Graphic Design
Mark, be sure to devote both content and space to communicate the five steps. Currently that level of primary/macro info is light. In the top direction the secondary/micro content is fairly restricted by its placement inside those arbitrary shapes. Once you get more content in, work on (1) navigation and (2) improving the formal presentation of that content.
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Mark, be sure to devote both content and space to communicate the five steps. Currently that level of primary/macro info is light.
In the top direction the secondary/micro content is fairly restricted by its placement inside those arbitrary shapes.
Once you get more content in, work on (1) navigation and (2) improving the formal presentation of that content.
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